You stormed through my world
An indomitable force
gentle kind&full of life
an invincible fierce kind of love
Owning me at once
I am lost in your eyes
mine will never shut again
Like a lamp being turned on
Eclipsing all darkness
You light up my heart
Senses memorizing you
In Blissful Detail
the warmth of your skin
the rhythm of your breath
The touch of your lips
ears tingling at the sound of you
That voice
the melody my mind unwinds to
Brushing your fingers over my heart like strumming a guitar
merging my soul to yours until we are one..
It is you I long for
you I wish to enjoy life with
You are the one I adore
The one I love
The one my heart beats for..
You will always be my weakness making me strong..
lamarrwenrich 
Oh this was wonderful. There were so many incredible lines, your eyes never shutting, the merging of the souls. Oh this was sweet. This inspires me with my own desire to write poetry of love. And by the way that last line “You will always be my weakness making me strong.” PERFECT.
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Thank you for taking the time to read and then share your thoughts.. I love reading them..
It inspires me
Thank you 😊
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Thanks. Reading your work pushes me to be better.
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Smiling 😊
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I cannot identify with this kind of poetry. What the hell was wrong with me? Not only was I never made to feel like this, I never felt like this. I guess I really was nothing more than a “business partner.”
Beautiful, though.
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That is okay.. Each day brings new things to our lives and we are always learning and growing..
Never say never..
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I would love to be proven wrong on so many fronts. I guess time will tell 🙂
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Time is your friend – let it be.. Let yourself heal
and better moments will fill your world.. I read your words and you deserve better.. Do not let the sad past keep you stuck like it’s your present moment because it is not. Set your mind free from it..
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If only I could put all those words into a pill and swallow them. Wouldn’t that be lovely?
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Awwww why yes it would be.. As we tell our own kids – nothing good comes easy.. Hard work in most things but it is worth it later..
Surround yourself with positive people and change up your thoughts
Replace them
With new ones..
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A wonderful poem.
Really enjoyed.
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Yay 😊 happy you enjoyed it- thank you for reading it
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“You will always be my weakness making me strong” . BRILLIANT!!
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Thank you thank you! Appreciate all your input😊
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Lamarr, I have missed your poems! My father passed early November, but I am blessed to lift my spirit! Your writing is always a treasure which I enjoy so much! Thanks for sharing your selfless heart this way! God bless!
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Hey – I’m so sorry for your loss.. that is never easy.. I pray you and your wife have a peaceful Christmas and that the sweet memories of your father are soothing..
God bless you
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