words flooded my senses
heart slamming the fences
you left in your wake..
Asthmatic reaction – allergic to the lies i sanctioned..
I’m a walking book
wrinkled heart bleeding out
pierced by your hook..
my heart expressed through each phrase you possess..
my pain has been published through all that you gain
every word, every sentence and paragraph remain..
dreams like thunder
Lightning was desire
charred us up
it’s no wonder..
Slowly erasing all that is you
letter by letter
this paper heart gets better..
false memories so dear
as you disappear..
Thsi was powerfully written. Pierced by your hook was just one of these vivid and strong lines here. Then, your finale…..oh so beautiful.
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Thank you thank you 😊
I am so glad you enjoyed this
and your thoughts are so appropriated😊
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This could be the introduction to my book. So elegant, soulful and gut-wrenching are the words. That’s what good writers do. They evoke powerful emotions…and memories. I love it.
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Awww thank you my friend💕
You are welcome to use this for your introduction 😊
I’d be honored !
I’m happy you enjoyed this
I always love all your input 💕
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Alas, my book has already been published. I would have loved it though. I love all of your writings. 🙂
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Thank you 😊
Likewise – I enjoy all your thoughts 💕
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