Ricocheting so quietly
It is frighteningly loud
can’t hear my tears..
they are speaking words that shatter to the ground before they reach your ears..
Shrapnel
Shooting from those lips that were once so gentle
Words flying at me like daggers
Bulls eye..
Empty you say
Meaningless you say
but oh it hurts so..
deadly
Painful
each one deeper than the last
The Wounds are fatal
Can’t dodge the bullets anymore
Can’t stop the hemorrhaging
Hear the ripping
It’s my heart bleeding out
Can’t keep up with this walk of pain
Who told you your aim wasn’t deadly
That your words are harmless
They pierce so clean
So fine so deep
they slice right through
You’re burying me alive..
Screaming…and nobody heard. So poignant.
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Thank you
I know it happens..
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Sometimes it’s dark, right? I felt this.
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Life is full of all emotions..
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It surely is.
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What an amazing pice. Such imagery and delicious metaphors. Bravo.
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Thank you π
Love your words
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Fantastic imagery! Very powerful. I felt the bite, could see the wounds left..
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Love your words – thank you π
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Smiles. Thank you and you’re most welcome. x
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the lines and images in this post is so cute….keep it up your effort…
life is full of emotion with happy and sorrow….
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Thank you for your kind
Words π
Looking forward to your blog
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welcome…lamarrwenrich
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Being there before, i feel all the emotion your words muster! You are a far better writer than me!
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I always enjoy what you have to say π thank you !
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You are an incredible writer π
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I feel the many emotions within the words many write. I decided to share a poem you have not read before….just wanted to make you smile my sister.
A Genuine Smile
A genuine smile joyfully brings to a day
Much more value than one really knows
Itβs more than the gold light of the sun
More soothing than the moons soft glow
It reaches down deep within oneβs heart
Making such inspired feelings to arise
It makes a loves flame leap forward
From the dormant place where it might lie
It causes a young heart to begin to pound
And it brings about a shortness of breath
It adds new meaning to life in oneβs mind
Along with a radiance that will always last
Itβs a treasure chest full of beautiful gems
More valuable than a pearl of great worth
For a genuine smile is valued so much more
Than any treasure to be found on this earth.
One of my favorite poems I wrote before I married my wife.
You have those qualities my sister, and one day someone very lucky will reward and treasure them! Have a wonderful Sunday!
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I love that poem π
Thank you for sharing with me
I appreciate all your words π
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Stunning words
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Thank you π appreciate that
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