Stunned
wide awake
Immobilized by the intensity of you
alive & affected by your love until my heart is ready to detonate
All I can do is bleed it out..
Cut me open and watch me live..
This love, this amazing passion that grips my heart
Rips me up and sets me free
A love so puzzling, so perfect
our connectedness can’t be mistaken
can’t be denied
an intimacy so deeply shared
you’ve erupted a part of me that never existed
I ache for you through every pore of my being
Burst my heart wide open
Living for the pain of you
I never knew
Intensely Beautiful!! ^_^
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Thank you ๐ I appreciate all your words
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Keep this up..you are a gifted writer!
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Thank you so much ๐ I appreciate your words
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Immobilized by the intensity of you <—love that line. What an amazing finale. Living for the pain of you I never knew. Your writing is so inspiring.
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Awww – I love all your feedback and compliments๐
Thank you so much ๐
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you’re welcome
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Beautiful โค I love the rhythm of your poems ๐
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Thank you for reading ๐
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