Electrifying
Blinded by the dazzling currents passing through her
Nothing making sense
seared by the thought of him
Inseparably together is how she feels
Uncertain where reality starts and fantasy ends
Her heart has blurred her mind
They’ve become one
It all looks the same
She wears him and he wears her
Her happiness and elation so quickly deflates.. Knowing they can’t possibly have what they want
Just a beautiful dream growing in them..
unsure & feeling lost
She wants what she imagines
Afraid her imaginings are better than where her feet are planted
Afraid she’s lost perception to truth
She reminds herself to want what she has
No bitter will take root in her
She buries the seed that has sprouted
closing herself to it
No matter that she envisions his skin next to hers
Her eyes cast down
Heavy with dreams she sighs,
So much wanting to make him mine she cries..
Her Untamed heart bleeding for him..
She will leave his colors behind
Knowing where she was is beautiful..
Her perception… Her realisation … She has understand all of it well through her hard and right times…. I love the opening lines…. Electrifying …. đâ¨đđ the sensation is very painful !! Loved it… !! đđźâ¨â¨đ
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the eternal strife of dreams and reality !
you expressed very meticulously, my favorite quote of Paulo Coelho
“At every moment of our lives, we all have one foot in a fairy tale and the other in the abyss”
very well written , i love it
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Great quote đ
That strife keeps us jumping đ
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Wow Lamarr… Such a beautiful and intense poem.. Loved it..
And he wears her and she wears him.. Loved this. Lovely post..
Have a beautiful day. đ
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Awww thanks đ I appreciate your feedback
Happy day to you
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It’s my pleasure..
Thanks. Wishing you the same. đ
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